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Tunefully, our phoenix rises,

Dormant for a million Kaisers,

One accrued the power due her,

Now in salutations drawn of blood...


A symphony of hallowed burning,

Thrice, the smell of cattle churning,

Again amongst the simple tides,

Therapeutic masterminding, of a new-born nation.


Out of place, horrific lying,

Borne of silenced, youthful, crying,

Once again I summon thee,

To come before the tolling of our over-crowded,

Feather shrouded,

Un-confounded, bell.
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The actual Title to this piece is "Fantastical Horror - Horrific Fantasy".

Coming from a thought and a few words, and then reading the meanings the words themselves have.

Gosh that changes things horrifically.
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That's amazing.

It would make a great metal song...

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You've thrown the worst fear
That can ever be hurled
Fear to bring children
Into the world

- Bob Dylan, "Masters of War"
:cling:
Hmm..... That it could.....
thanks! oooer! and for the :+fav:!!!
*ZoeLove*

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Yum.
Holy God, this is one of the most captivating poems I have read.
I enjoy your vocaubulary immensely. ^w^
This was a beautiful poem, it reminded me of dreams? Very, fantasy like.
Eloquent and entralling! I lurrveee it. ^.^
Thankyou so much!
Fantasy was my aim.... and, and, and, everything!
Wow.
I got a comment. Yay. And it was nice. xD
I'm gonna go around in my euphoric cloud now. xD

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Aw, I am glad =D
It seriously was quite amazing, I very much enjoyed it, *squees* you are quite talented!
Careful, or I'll become your fangirl!

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"Our Only Weapons Are The Guns Of Youth,
There's Only Time Before They Tighten The Noose,
Then The Hunt Will Be On For You."
Haha.
Thankyoueee.
xD. OMG a fangirl! oh, oh, oh! Pick me!
We can be eachothers fangirl! xD
*Loves your writtings also*

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Oooh, thankyou!
*FAN-GIRL-ATTACK*
yay!♥

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"Our Only Weapons Are The Guns Of Youth,
There's Only Time Before They Tighten The Noose,
Then The Hunt Will Be On For You."
xD
Yay! Mutual fan-girl-ship!

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And my mood is now relfective of my fangirl-ness. XD

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"Our Only Weapons Are The Guns Of Youth,
There's Only Time Before They Tighten The Noose,
Then The Hunt Will Be On For You."

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